Brenda Meets Ba & Bakul at the Beachy Bookstore #Blogchatterbloghop

"Myself Bakul from Baroda." A 30 something man approached Brenda. She was startled by the man's attire. She had never seen so many colours on a man before. She was left amused, "I am Brenda from New York." She could sense the man's nervousness. " You reporter?" 

"Oh, yes, I work for the New York Flash." Brenda declared.

The warm, cozy and colourful bookstore that they were in was very different from the usual ones. Situated by the sandy beach, it had a cafe, equally colourful. Even the books that adored the racks had been arranged in a rainbow themed pattern. Brenda quite liked the overall decor and theme. In fact she was planning to write about it in her next feature, when Bakul came. His outfit perfectly matched the cafe's overall theme. "Nice outfit." Brenda was not a pro at hiding her feelings.

"Thanks, Ba's choice." 

"Ba, is that your girlfriend?"

"No no, grandmother."

Suddenly the entire bookstore was shaken by a thundering voice, "Bakul, Bakul."

Bakul almost fell from his chair, while Brenda saw an elderly lady coming towards them. She looked angry. "Bakul, you fool!! You made me wait outside for f-i-v-e minutes!!" 

"Sorry Ba." Bakul fumbled, trembling.

Ba now turned towards Brenda, with scrutinising eyes, " She who?"

Bakul replied feebly, " She Brenda, reporter from New York."

Brenda could sense the increasing tension between the grandmother and grandson. She quickly smiled at the old lady, " Hi Ba!"

The elderly woman's temper sank southwards and she gave a cute toothless smile, " Me your Ba?" 

The cheerful Brenda nodded, " You are Bakul's Ba, that makes you my Ba too."

Ba looked elated, she reached for her purse and took out a box, handing it over to Brenda. As Brenda opened the box she could smell something delicious, and saw a few flatbreads inside. " Flatbreads? Chapatti?' She asked excitedly.

"Thepla, tasty Gujarati chapatti." Ba said proudly.

Suddenly she changed her tone, "Husband?" Ba asked raising her eyebrows, slightly concerned. 

" Oh no! not married. " replied Brenda.

Ba seemed to be relieved and looked at Bakul, " Bakul, Bahu!"

Bakul turned red and Brenda was left confused. " What's Bahu?" 

"You, Bahu." said the old lady, rolling her eyes. 

"Oh no Ba, I am Brenda, not Bahu." Brenda tried to explain her.

"You Brenda, you Bahu." Ba was adamant.

Brenda was very confused, turned to Bakul, " Bakul, can you please explain me?"

Bakul was scared but still explained in a feeble voice that his grandmother wanted him to marry so she tried to find a prospective bride for him in every young and unmarried woman she came across. Today was Brenda's turn to be the Bahu.

Brenda laughed out loudly and hugged the cute elderly Ba, lovingly. 

"Oh my sweet Ba, Brenda is your Bahu for today. Come lets' have dinner."

The whole bookstore, that was silent till now, suddenly burst to sounds of applauds and cheering and now they noticed a crowd had gathered inside, witnessing their amusing conversation all this while.

Brenda looked outside, at the waves, deciding the title of her next feature, " Brenda Meets Ba & Bakul at the Beachy Bookstore."


This post is a part of Blogchatter Blog Hop

This blog post is part of ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’
hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla




Comments

  1. I loved Ba and the spirited exchange between the three.

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  2. I love the alliteration in the post title ! It immediately drew my attention and I wanted to read it and discover the Ba , Bakul and Bahu connection.

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  3. Oh! so lovely! May the tribe of Ba, Bakul, and Bahu flourish spreading happiness to readers like me.

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  4. I love the delightful story setting in the Beachy Bookstore. The lively interactions between Brenda, Bakul, and Ba were humorous. I felt as if I was a part of the story.

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  5. So sweet! Ba, Bakul, Brenda and the beach bookstore...together a Bahu saga, so brought a smile to my face.

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  6. Ba..Brenda and Bakul...trip saga and cute story. I felt all of them specially Ba.. it gives cute smile and happiness to me.

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  7. Oh what a lovely heartwarming story! I had a smile on my face the entire time i was reading...would love to see more of Brenda, Ba, and Bakul. Keep writing!!!!

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  8. Lovely story... Make these three the main cast of your stories, please. They are lovely. Such a nice misfit characters which are perfect fit for humourous and hearty stories!

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  9. What a delightful encounter! Brenda's spontaneity and warmth shine through as she embraces Bakul's spirited Ba, turning a humorous mix-up into a heartwarming moment.

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  10. When a story makes you smile or makes you think even after you are done with reading, it means the authour's work is outstanding. I felt the same here Reubena... It was a great read for me.

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  11. This was such a fun and heartwarming read! Ba’s lively personality and her instant fondness for Brenda made me smile. Loved the colorful setting of the bookstore and the amusing ‘Bahu’ twist. A delightful story with the perfect mix of humor and warmth!

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  12. hahaha! Such a cutie Ba and loved how Brenda took it so sportingly

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  13. This was such a fun read. I couldn’t stop smiling at the whole “Bahu” mix-up. Ba’s sweet yet funny way of trying to set things up for Bakul had me laughing. The bookstore setting gave the story such a cozy vibe, and I could easily picture the crowd reacting. I really enjoyed this one—it’s simple but so heartwarming. Can’t wait to read more of Brenda’s adventures.

    - Anjali Tripathi Upadhyay

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  14. Oh this is such a sweet story. I loved the banter between the characters and it was a delight to read! :)

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  15. This was a fun read and quite an interesting title for a book too. I'm imagining Bakul in his colourful clothes now. :-)

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  16. Your post about Brenda meeting Ba and Bakul at the Beachy Bookstore is delightful! The narrative beautifully captures the essence of friendship and adventure. Looking forward to more of your engaging stories!

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  17. I loved your ability to weave this difficult yet cute prompt into something so meaningful! Loved reading this piece!

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  18. Very cute! I visualised the whole thing!!

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  19. Wonderful writing. Ba was such a cutie. Loved the sweet little story. 🤩❤️

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  20. Such a cute interaction, betweek bendra bakul and Ba. I am sure Bakul was enjoying and hoping too. Haha, nice lovely short story. Write more often these stories.

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  21. I love how the story nurtured. A pleasant interaction is what keot me reading. waiting for the continuation of itb

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  22. Such a cute story. I liked the change in expression of Ba after realising she is not Bakul's girlfriend.

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